I thought this was okay.
I thought the vocals were awful, and in my opinion ruined what were really cool drawings and animations.
The content was so childish, and kinda makes me scratch my head a bit if this is what you do for fun....
The random cut shots for me added no humour at all.
I think that you got skill drawing and making cartoons, I'm probably just too old to appreciate the content and subject matter.
In conclusion i think fix the audio, put in the time to make it better quality and it might be funnier to a broader audience.
Keep up the good work though.
I am very interested to see more of your work!