Interesting story i liked it.
I thought the vocals were a little patchy but over all great work!
I liked the simple art style and animations.
The paint was good and i liked the nice gradients.
Keep the animations coming i can't wait to see more.
Interesting story i liked it.
I thought the vocals were a little patchy but over all great work!
I liked the simple art style and animations.
The paint was good and i liked the nice gradients.
Keep the animations coming i can't wait to see more.
Thank you! I appreciate it! :D
An interesting short.
Not much happening, i would hire an English speaking voice actor or speak in your natural language. Didn't get the jokes, kind of a cheap cash in on Deadpool notoriety.
I did like the drawings and the bear rug.
overall not bad.
hey man good that you like: D
Cheers
Nice little intro short.
Looking forward to seeing some toons this quality.
Thanks! It means a lot!
This was very funny.
I enjoyed the jokes and thought the animations matched them well.
Overall nice and polished and enjoyable to watch.
btw I'm a Vegan...
That's a lie I'm eating bacon right now.
Thank you for your review!!
Although its a bit rushed i laughed at the final punchline.
I'm glad i read it through till the end!
Cool animation.
I liked the parody and liked how superman handled his business.
I thought the sfx levels need some work, they took me out of the scene a bit.
The final joke was lost on me but i still enjoyed the toon!
Great work!
Appreciate the feedback.
I can imagine a ton of work went into animating that short.
I think zooming in and out could have been a little more polished in the sense of the foreground plane. Some object closer to the camera would help give the illusion of more depth on the zoom shots. In addition they would also give you a greater illusion of speed on the horizontal panning.
having said that this was really good.
There were some great slow motion shots.
The fighting was very fluent and the character motion very graceful.
I really enjoyed the painted backing.
My favorite part of the toon was the character powerups.
Overall good job!
Great stuff!
I don't know why but it's
#5
for me. The audio is brilliant.
Great to see the community coming together!
#5 is really pulling away, thanks for voting!
This was so polished in every aspect.
The story, the art, animation, soundscape, and vocals all were brilliant.
I particularly liked the cave exit shot featuring the two tones of darkness on Cubone.
A pro toon well done!
Thank you!
Great stuff.
I thought the story was great. Simple, but funny and the dialogue kept the story moving forward and keep me entertained.
I thought the vocals could have been a bit cleaner.
I liked the acting but thought a little more passionate was required.
(if this is in a second language though, bravo and i shut my mouth, i can't speak one properly.)
The soundscape and sfx were great i thought they were pretty spot on.
There were a couple issues with camera shots zooming in and changing angles a tad too sharp which is easy to do until you become more familiar with timing shot changes.
I thought the backgrounds were great. for me the highlight of the short.
I liked the character style and the bendy arm animations, most notably the typing.
i thought this was really good.
Looking forward to the next one!
Thank you! Yep, it's my second language, and I dubbed it myself and I know it could be more passionate =) I was very tired at the time and a bit drunk =). I will try to provide more quality with vocals in other pieces, maybe attract some voiceactors. Thank you for your feedback it will really help me during the production of other stuff! Yeah, backgrounds took AGES to make. I guess I will simplify some things next time trying not to bring down the quality of backgrounds too much.
Brick Productions is an Australian based production house focused on animated shorts. Brick Productions was started by writer Nick Kilvert and animator Brady Leach. The duo are currently working on a number of animated web series.
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Murdoch University
Perth
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