Great stuff.
I thought the story was great. Simple, but funny and the dialogue kept the story moving forward and keep me entertained.
I thought the vocals could have been a bit cleaner.
I liked the acting but thought a little more passionate was required.
(if this is in a second language though, bravo and i shut my mouth, i can't speak one properly.)
The soundscape and sfx were great i thought they were pretty spot on.
There were a couple issues with camera shots zooming in and changing angles a tad too sharp which is easy to do until you become more familiar with timing shot changes.
I thought the backgrounds were great. for me the highlight of the short.
I liked the character style and the bendy arm animations, most notably the typing.
i thought this was really good.
Looking forward to the next one!