I think there was a lot of work went into this its good to see people working on some toons.
The pace was much too fast fort a text driven dialogue.
The expressions were too much on the moon guy and made me hate, who i think is meant to be the hero...
I think if you spent a little more time on understanding expressions you would be able to portray a clear emotional context.
Over all this could have a lot of refinement.
A positive i thought there was potential in the animations and drawings.
still a good effort!