Nice and simple.
I thought the audio was a good quality and the shots were interesting.
It was bit short but i still enjoyed it.
Nice toon!
Nice and simple.
I thought the audio was a good quality and the shots were interesting.
It was bit short but i still enjoyed it.
Nice toon!
Nice animation.
The tween frames need a little more refinement but still really good.
I would have liked some sound in there to help invite me to the world.
You could think of doing some more interesting angles to help break up the shot and lengthen the toon.
The colours were nice.
The highlight for me was the background , nice colours and great depth.
When i use a pan shot like that and i only have one subject to frame i try to make it a little slower so it is less jarring to the audience.
Thanks a lot! I will definitely try to add more to it next time.
That was fucked up!
Funny joke.
The art could have been a little bit neater but maybe with the crude joke it matches perfectly. Audio was good and the acting was funny.
Nice short!
Great stuff.
I enjoyed the simple art style.
It allowed you to focus on the story telling, great design choice.
The story was interesting and i want to see what happens.
I enjoyed the characters very much and thought the female support was a nice touch.
One note on the writing, I think you should try keep it to one rape joke an episode. Because it is such ah powerful topic you don't want to water it down by over using it.
The acting was great and the vocals pretty good quality.
Looking forward to more!
Great sode!
Very funny.
Fantastic art work.
I like the adult nature of it, wasn't over the top just enough for a bit of fun.
The spider man motion was terrific. Schlick! Woosh!
The only criticism i have is that i think you could have added a rip sound effect, won't put a spoiler but you know when.
Great work!!!
thanks man!
I was actually contemplating doing sfx for this, but I didn't wanna ruin the same feel the original had. In hind sight I do think it would've been a little better with sounds
Funny premise!
I enjoy "sketch" style art but this was little bit too rough for my taste.
The audio quality was a bit low.
The acting was great.
The writing was also top notch.
I enjoyed it very much, a very funny toon!
Brick Productions is an Australian based production house focused on animated shorts. Brick Productions was started by writer Nick Kilvert and animator Brady Leach. The duo are currently working on a number of animated web series.
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Murdoch University
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