Brick-Productions's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Battlerite Trailer Parody]

Nice and simple.
I thought the audio was a good quality and the shots were interesting.
It was bit short but i still enjoyed it.
Nice toon!

[Yawn]

Nice animation.
The tween frames need a little more refinement but still really good.
I would have liked some sound in there to help invite me to the world.
You could think of doing some more interesting angles to help break up the shot and lengthen the toon.
The colours were nice.

The highlight for me was the background , nice colours and great depth.

When i use a pan shot like that and i only have one subject to frame i try to make it a little slower so it is less jarring to the audience.

acillustrations responds:

Thanks a lot! I will definitely try to add more to it next time.

[Hey Brain]

That was fucked up!
Funny joke.
The art could have been a little bit neater but maybe with the crude joke it matches perfectly. Audio was good and the acting was funny.
Nice short!

[The Journey Begins - THE ADVENTURERS]

Great stuff.
I enjoyed the simple art style.
It allowed you to focus on the story telling, great design choice.
The story was interesting and i want to see what happens.

I enjoyed the characters very much and thought the female support was a nice touch.

One note on the writing, I think you should try keep it to one rape joke an episode. Because it is such ah powerful topic you don't want to water it down by over using it.

The acting was great and the vocals pretty good quality.
Looking forward to more!
Great sode!

[Hey I'm Spider-Man: Episode 7]

Very funny.
Fantastic art work.
I like the adult nature of it, wasn't over the top just enough for a bit of fun.

The spider man motion was terrific. Schlick! Woosh!
The only criticism i have is that i think you could have added a rip sound effect, won't put a spoiler but you know when.

Great work!!!

RyanStorm responds:

thanks man!
I was actually contemplating doing sfx for this, but I didn't wanna ruin the same feel the original had. In hind sight I do think it would've been a little better with sounds

[Rubix sucks@ doing things]

Since you are young and just starting out, I will try give some pointers.
That was not very good for animation.

You had a cool drawing in there, so do some of that and animate it.
There are loads of great animation tutorials out there but start here https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCHu2KNu6TtJ0p4hpSW7Yv7Q

You should work on a script before recording or improve your improvisation skills.
If you have trouble writing you can collaborate with a writer on here.
People aren't really interested in blooper reals when there is no other work to go with it.
You need to try watch mouth noises when you record, so do a recording then listen back.

Keep at it, looking forward to seeing some of those cool drawings brought to life!

officalrubix responds:

Thank you for the feedback! C: I appreciate it.

[Pass the Sticks]

Enjoyed this one a lot.
I thought the feel good comedy and dynamic between the friends was great.
I liked the face animations and art.
The bodies threw me a touch at first, but grew on my quickly.

Great job!

[The Great Quest of Heroes - PILOT]

There were a number of areas that could be improved on this pilot.
The art was bit patchy and the audio was low quality.
The vocals need a bit of editing and the actor needs a bit more mic control.

Although it sounds a bit harsh i did enjoy this.
I thought it was well presented in the show format.
The direction was nice and the shot selection helped move the story forward.
If the art and audio was a bit cleaner this would be a great project.
Overall i did enjoy it, and will keep an eye out for the next one to see how it improves over time.

Keep up the good work!

[The Visit]

Funny premise!
I enjoy "sketch" style art but this was little bit too rough for my taste.
The audio quality was a bit low.
The acting was great.
The writing was also top notch.
I enjoyed it very much, a very funny toon!

[Undertale + POKEMON?!?!]

I liked the universe transition breaking the fourth wall.
Art could have been a little cleaner but over all a nice toon.