Brick-Productions's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wandering season process, not fun content]

Great work.
Your progress shots were good and jazza will be able to see you did the work.
If i were to guess a topic i would say winter running through spring?
you draw better than me already !

keep it up!!!

panchula responds:

Oh my god, thank you! This actually means a lot! and the drawing better than you thing: art is a subjective thing.

[Crouching Hunter, Hidden Deer]

I liked the story i thought it was funny.
I the animations and drawing were a little rougher than i prefer but overall a nice toon!
good work!

[Solace Story Board]

Great stuff, i see what you mean by ambitious!
I think your art is amazing, your direction is amazing, even the story boards were put together well for this short. The music set the tone well and it felt like reading a comic. No dialogue or story was needed for this short, the art moved the story forward that well.

My only one criticism is that i think your writing/story idea doesn't do your art justice. I say this in the sense that i feel like every other manga i watch has this scene. It's to the point i feel like the mold needs to be broken by great artists like yourself.

having said that i think your project twill be amazing even if it only is half as good as the story boarding.
Great Job!!

Eggabeg responds:

Thank you!

I know what you mean, this scene is very typically cliche in its writing and setting, it's kind of a homage to my own little ideas of a particular scene that would be far more grand by the time the story got to that point! I'm glad you mention it not needing dialogue, I may have a running narrative in the final if I find someone with a good voice for it... I do happen to know a few so lets hope! It would be the voice of a past mentor reassuring the heroine of her past endurances and why she must continue to endure, the difference between standing and getting up. Similar to the whole Batman 'why do we fall?' little speech!

[Green Drinks on St. Patrick's Day!]

This was fantastic!
Great work.
Loved the humour!
The highlight for me was the art i like the style very much!!
Great short!

Familypants responds:

thanks!

[Deadpool the Musical]

I thought this was really great!
With a little more time the vocalist will develop and i think will be top notch.
Nice narrative and nice cute animations to match it.
Great work!

[RAPE TIME]

Art was great.
Writing was bit lame.
overall bit average.

Rape can be funny, humor is an interesting beast.
George Lucas raping Indy in South Park was hilarious.
That is rape.

The bottom line is what makes someone laugh is funny.
some jokes are in poor tastes true, but to deem a topic out of bounds is close minded and in my opinion not in the spirit of newgrounds.

is dropping an anvil on someones head funny? think about it....

Haters gonna hate!

[Glove]

Another great short.

I think there were issues with the sound quality.
The mix needs to be worked on, atm it is muddy, everything mashing together nothing in it's own space. The music/sfx themselves were well timed and appropriate just levels were poor.

With out knowing where the actor/writer comes from it sounds like English is not their first language. It removes me from the story as things sound a little clumsy.
Writing and acting in your native tongue with the use subtitles will leave you with a more immersive/ emotionally connective short.

If the artist teamed up with a more refined writer and good audio team some really brilliant work could be produced.

The art was fantastic again such amazing vision i really enjoyed it. I thought the animations were a little rough but i appreciate the style and enjoyed it thoroughly.
I really think there is a lot of potential in the style and can't wait to see it develop!

Detejubaraaleks responds:

I agree with you at almost every point! :)
Maybe i should do the next one in swedish.
Thanks alot for watching! Really appreciate your critisism!

[Doctor Sun]

Great short!!

I thought the audio and acting was a little low quality.
This was overshadowed by amazing artwork.
The drawing and effect animations were beautiful.
I liked the simple character animations style, but would like to see even more.
The characters were great i love how they were drawn.
over all great toon!!

[Speed Sculpting "Colossus"]

You are really amazing at sculpting!
Have you thought about trying an animal maybe an x-man , Beast/Sabertooth type thing or even a Pokemon
Can't wait to see what ever you choose!

Black-Crystal responds:

Beast and Sabertooth is hard to sculpt because of their fur and hair. But I want to try either of them and see if i can portray it well :)
Pokemon is a interesting choice too, thanks!

[Party Friends]

Interesting toon.
I thought this was a bit juvenile.
Didn't like the backhanded insult to the "ginger boy'
Thought it was roughly drawn and animated.
I liked some of your other work uch better!
love that you're making toons keep it up!