After the depressing ish I just watched this is refreshing.
Silly but funny.
The audio matched the tone of the toon.
The art was simple but matched the style of the short.
Interesting art styles like the other vids.
I won't address the topic as I have already in other reviews.
The narration really needs work. It sounds like a screen reader.
It took away from the emotion of the short.
It sounds like you are very young or English is a second language.
The was very little animation, but what was there was nice, simple yet elegant.
The colours matched the tone of the piece.
It's obviously a topic that you care about.
An interesting concept.
To be informative there needs to be some more information other than your opinion.
You need to show some stats and research.
The narration needed a bit of work, it wasn't quite clean enough to be an infomercial.
I think 1 of these vids is enough, let alone 9 more...
If you keep it up and refine them a bit, you will probably get some government work, though.
On a side note, maybe do a 10 part study on why caring is beautiful, as opposed to why stigma is bad.... It might bring you some joy :)
I think #6 for me was the funniest.
but now I want a donut.
when do entries open and close?
haha right?! he wrote a whole song about it which we'll play on the RubberOnion Animation Podcast probably next week or the one after when we talk about all these.
as for your question: entries are due by the end of the month and use #RubberOnionBattle on Instagram (which limits these entries to 15sec or under). topic this month is "Worst Video Game!"
interesting art style and concept.
The story was bit predictable and a bit unrealistic so the impact was lost on me.
You did do some good shots, but it was a little bit like watching a scene from a how-to textbook.
Not that it's a bad thing, but not very captivating.
I think a younger audience would enjoy it though
Overall enjoyed the art very much, would like to see a little more substance.
I have 8 more stories planned, so maybe it will get better.
I always enjoy spoilers in the review section, great stuff.
I enjoyed the simple artwork and colour selections.
Over dramatised for what it was. The animation timing was pretty off.
The story didn't do anything for me, I found it kinda pointless.
Nice music selection without it, the short would've been very dull.
Overall interesting toon. nice work.
The style and colours were simple yet powerful.
This is a great animation.
I have no idea what this is.
It's like a terrible comedy but under drama.
The story was terrible.
The art was good. the shot selections were passable.
The audio needs to be cleaned up.
The acting was not very good.
Good effort but overall I didn't enjoy this.
The animation was really good.
I didn't enjoy the raps.
The clunky flow stood out to me as a long time rap fan.
People who don't listen to rap will probably enjoy it.
The story of the track was good.
I did like the beat.
I thought the colour selection was nice.
The animation style was simple but effective.
Looks like a lot of work went into it.
Overall a good, polished short. Great stuff!
Thanks man, appreciate the feedback!
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